Some of the Books I’ve Edited
Fiction
A Village in the Fields
By Patty Enrado
I edited this gorgeously written historical novel about a Filipino-American farmworker fighting for civil rights during the 1960s Delano Grape Strikes. Patty’s novel was shortlisted for the William Saroyan International Prize for Writing in 2016.
Laurel has a keen eye for detail and a deep understanding of structure, character development, and dialogue. She challenged me to dig deep in exploring scenes and strands of my narrative. The level of trust and respect I had in her sure hands enabled me to take chances and continue developing as a writer.”
—Patty Enrado, author of A Village in the Fields
Watermelon Snow
By William A. Liggett
As his writing coach, I helped Bill— a first-time novelist with a passion for the environment—develop his characters and build a taut plot for this cli-fi (climate-fiction) adventure novel set high on a glacier in Washington State’s Olympic Mountains.
Your encouragement and mentoring have helped me learn the craft of writing fiction, and your positive comments improved the story a lot. Thank you.”
—William Liggett, author of Watermelon Snow
The Fire Thief
By Debra Bokur
I edited an early draft of this detective novel, the first in the Dark Paradise Mystery trilogy, which is set in the Hawaiian Islands.
Thank you so much for your thoughtful editing! I can’t tell you how valuable and insightful I’ve found your comments, which are of enormous value to the present book and to my upcoming mystery novel, which I’m working on right now.”
—Debra Bokur, author of The Fire Thief, The Bone Field, and The Lava Witch
Nonfiction
Mindfulness for Beginners
By Jon Kabat-Zinn
It was a treat to copyedit this book of Jon Kabat-Zinn’s ground-breaking guide to mindfulness-based stress reduction. The book includes an accompanying audio.
I would like to express my gratitude to Laurel Kallenbach for her careful and thoughtful copyediting.”
—Jon Kabat-Zinn, author of Mindfulness for Beginners (from the Acknowledgments page)
Free Your Voice
By Sylvia Nakkach & Valerie Carpenter
Editing this book about the healing potential of your voice (singing or chanting) combined my love of words and music.
Laurel, you have been a delight to work with. I am grateful for your huge contribution, which has made this a much better book!”
—Valerie Carpenter, co-author of Free Your Voice
The Busy Woman’s Guide to Writing a World-Changing Book
By Cynthia Morris
While proofreading this inspirational, make-it-happen book, I discovered many tips that applied to writing my novel.
Your Power to Heal
By Henry Grayson, PhD
As the developmental editor for Dr. Grayson’s inspiring book about how our minds affect our health, I helped him organize all the nuggets from his vast knowledge about how readers can change subconscious beliefs to improve well-being.
Embracing Anxiety
By Karla McLaren, M.Ed.
While copyediting this extraordinary book, I learned that anxiety can be helpful because it gives us the vigilance and drive to get things done so we can fulfill our goals.
Tending the Heart Fire
By Shiva Rea
I was the proofreader for this book by yoga teacher Shiva Rea. It interweaves ancient wisdom and modern science, and it’s filled with meditations, life guidance, seasonal rituals, and daily practices.
Dharma of Dogs
anthology, edited by Tami Simon
Writers such as Alice Walker, Eckhart Tolle, Mirabai Starr, and Mark Nepo contributed essays about spiritual lessons from their dog companions for this collection, which I copyedited. I worked on Pam Houston’s essay, “Mother’s Day Storm,” through tears of joy and sadness.
Karma of Cats
anthology, edited by Diana Ventimiglia
To maintain feline/canine balance in my copyediting, I worked on this anthology of essays by cat lovers, including Geneen Roth, who penned a tribute to her white kitten, and Alice Walker’s poem, “I Was Born to Hold a Cat.”
Memoir
Walking in Grace with Grief
By Della Temple
By telling the story of losing her 29-year-old son in a car accident, Della Temple offers spiritual insights for others walking the path of grief. I was the book’s editor. It won a National Indie Excellence Award gold medal.
Each time I read a passage, I marvel at how you turned my words into magic, Laurel. I treasure your input.”
—Della Temple, author of Tame Your Inner Critic and Walking in Grace with Grief
A Crooked Smile
By Terri Tate
A humorous cancer memoir? Terri Tate was given a 2 percent chance of surviving, but she did it with prescription-strength humor, and I had the pleasure of being her book’s proofreader.
Things That Join the Sea and the Sky
By Mark Nepo
Long ago, as editor of Colorado North Review literary magazine, I published poems by Mark Nepo. Recently I was honored to copyedit his book Things That Join the Sea and the Sky, a collection of moving short prose reflections gleaned from his journal entries—reminders to breathe through both sorrow and joy.
High Magick
By Damien Echols
Subtitled A Guide to the Spiritual Practices That Saved My Life on Death Row, High Magick is part memoir and part guide to magick, which Echols used to stave off despair while in prison for 18 years (10 of them in solitary confinement) for a crime he didn’t commit. I copyedited this riveting account of how Echols manifested his freedom.